I could feel the crisp cold wind
touch my chilled cheeks.
Crushing the icy snow with my feet,
I watching my frozen but joyful puppies
dash in the crunchy white ice.
As i looked up at the brilliant sky,
delivering this chilling day,
I saw small snowflakes falling,
sending excitement through my body
that there would be no school tomorrow.
In the back of my mind I wanted to go inside
and drink my warm hot chocolate
with mini marshmallows,
but I didn't want to leave this winter wonderland.
techniques:
I used consonance
I used cacophony
I used enjambment
Wow, this is a pretty poem. I love the imagery and the way you just described things. It made me cold.
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