Monday, February 3, 2014

Research Paper Draft

           This week I have been working very hard on my draft for my research paper.  I am pretty confident in my topic which is "Child labor in the british industrial revolution". I am confident in this topic because I am actually interested in it! Finding information on this topic was kind of hard because I was it is hard to know which websites were reliable. What was easy though was putting all my thoughts together.
           Since I was interested in my topic it was easy for me to remember what I had read and where I wanted to put the information. When you read my draft I would like you to correct any grammatical errors I have and any information that you think could be wrong. I feel that my information is correct but someone told me they weren't sure if it was correct.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Allie,
    I'm glad you really enjoy you're topic, it's great that you don't have much difficulty in drafting! I've actually never heard anything about your topic, very interesting. I know I also had trouble finding some reliable sites, they're tricky to pick out. Best of luck on your project!

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